Northwest Passage

In mid-January, I went for a hike around Lake Otomińskie. I took some moody photos in the mist. Here's how I edited one of them.

Northwest Passage

I'm always on the lookout for fog or mist. In Gdańsk, they are a rare phenomenon. However, I can often expect better conditions just a few kilometres outside the city. One such place is Otomin, a village in Gmina Kolbudy. I can get there in under 30 minutes and the area offers vast woodlands and a picturesque lake.

Recently, I went there for a hike. The weather forecast promised dense fog and a sky entirely obscured by low clouds. In short, perfect conditions for moody woodland photography. I arrived before sunrise but couldn't see the sun rising due to the cloud cover. The fog wasn't as dense as I'd expected; in the forest, there was no discernible subject separation due to fog, but the opposite shore of the lake was always enshrouded in mist. I grabbed my Nikon F100, loaded it with some Kodak Pro Image 100 and went along the shore, hunting for moody scenes.

I reached a small sandy beach in a tiny bay on the lake's southern end. The bay connects to the rest of the lake via a narrow isthmus. As I stood on the beach, I noticed some foam and driftwood. The long branch in the water was pointing in the general direction of the isthmus, north-west. I composed the frame using my widest focal length, 16 mm. The polariser made the water transparent and uncovered the details of the sand and rocks underneath. I took a shot at a medium aperture and a rather fast shutter speed to freeze the motion of the waves. Then, I closed the aperture to f/16, screwed on my ND8 and took another shot, exposing it for 10 seconds (the calculated exposition was 6 seconds; I added the extra four to compensate for reciprocity failure). This long exposure turned out to be a banger. Here's the original negative:

Original negative scan

Let me preface this part with a disclaimer. My editing process isn't exactly as streamlined as I'm going to describe here. For example, negative conversion and exposure correction are done in a few steps. I also had to use other frames from the film roll as a reference to better calibrate the negative conversion. Some steps were done in a different order and required more than one iteration. To keep things simple, I'll pretend all this didn't happen.

So, the "first" step was to get rid of the film borders and the negative holder. I needed to crop. While I was at it, I also decided to do away with the vignette at the bottom of the image. I couldn't remove the vignette at the top because there was very little space left and I didn't want to lose the tree tops.

Crop applied

Next, I performed a negative conversion using the negadoctor module. As I've hinted before, it was mostly based on other frames in the film roll. I only slightly tweaked the highlight white balance for a neutral look without any colour cast.

Negative converted to positive

I like to apply a rehaze to all film images. At -20%, it softens the film grain and smooths the colours slightly without sacrificing sharpness. Since it's applied before negadoctor in the module chain, it slightly darkens the image.

Negative dehaze applied

To counter the darkening of the image, I bumped the exposure by +0.3 EV to reach the final value of +1 EV. I didn't touch the black level correction as I prefer to work with the shadows and blacks in the next step.

Exposure correction

Colour balance let me achieve a more contrasty look. I separated the shadows from the midtones by a considerable distance, obtaining a somewhat high-key look. I also bumped the highlights a little, making sure to leave some wiggle room for additional tweaks later.

Tone separation using the colour balance tool

It was time to deal with the vignette from the stacked filters. Since the sky was uniformly coloured, it was simple to clone-stamp the dark corners.

Retouched vignette from stacked filters

I opted for a subtle tweak to the colours. I slightly desaturated what little green there was in the image. On the other hand, I gave a small boost to the oranges and reds. The changes mainly affected the driftwood, making it pop a little more.

Colour saturation adjusted

Next, I decided to give the image a little extra depth and three-dimensionality. In nature, the closer something is to the viewer, the more contrasty it is. Inversely, the farther away something is, the flatter it looks, with no true blacks due to the atmosphere getting in the way. This effect is even more apparent in misty conditions.

To achieve this, I used two instances of colour balance rgb. In the one named "foreground", I created a gradient mask at the bottom of the frame and boosted the contrast considerably. I made the effect even stronger by lowering shadows and midtones.

The other instance, called "background", used a second gradient mask at the top of the image, up to approximately the midpoint between the driftwood and the trees on the other shore. There, I lowered the contrast and applied a small boost to the highlights and midtones.

At this point, I was nearly done. Before publishing the image, I wanted to apply some dodging and burning to make the driftwood pop even more. I also wanted to make the lake's bottom a bit more interesting.

I started with burning. I used a few brush masks to bring out some detail in the sand. I also accentuated the shadow underneath the branch.

For the dodging, I did the opposite: I added a stronger highlight on the driftwood and subtly brightened the lake in a few places to bring some contrast to an otherwise flat-looking surface.

The final step was to add some bloom to the sky. It has a double effect: it makes the sky less interesting by brightening it and removing what little texture was left in it. Also, by spilling into the trees, it increased the effect of the fog.

Bloom applied

Here's a comparison of what I started with (after cropping, to make the comparison more meaningful) and the final edit.

I am quite happy with how the photo turned out. The composition is interesting and I reckon I managed to guide the viewer's eye through the driftwood up to the fog-bound isthmus, without letting the waves attract any attention on the way. I consider this one of my better shots.

Here's the photo, plus two others taken that day.

Northwest Passage | Dominik Marczuk
Driftwood at the shore of Lake Otomińskie (Otomin, near Gdańsk, Poland) pointing northwest at a small isthmus. The other side of the lake is enshrouded in mist. The water is smoothed out thanks to a long exposure time. I was hiking around the lake with a friend. My hope was to photograph the sunrise, but the weather conditions that day didn’t allow anything of the kind. Instead, I had to focus on making the best of the morning mist. This particular image was a tough capture because I didn’t have an ND1000 filter on me. To achieve a 10-second shutter speed (that’s after adjusting for the Schwarzschild effect) that smoothed out the waves, I had to resort to my ND64 and to closing the aperture to f/16, where f/5.6 would likely suffice to have everything sharp front to back. The mental gymnastics with the exposure maths and the wet knees (I had to kneel on wet sand to look into the viewfinder) were worth it: the image easily turned out to be a portfolio shot! The two stacked filters at 16 mm focal length produced a horrendous vignette, which I had to remove in post. The edits include a fair bit of precise dodging and burning in the fore- to midground, but besides that, very little has been done to the image. Nikon F100 + Kodak Pro Image 100 Nikon AF-S Nikkor 16-35 mm f/4G 16 mm | 10 s | f/16 | ISO 100 Marumi Exus CPL Marumi DHG Super ND64 - FLICKR-Roll-33-Frame-15.jpg
Mistful Thinking | Dominik Marczuk
A still and misty Lake Otomińskie (Poland) just before sunrise. The water is calm and reflective, with a thin layer of ice forming. The opposite bank is obscured by a thick layer of fog. The image was taken at, or shortly before sunrise. I can’t really tell since the sun never peeked through the thick layer of low-hanging milky clouds. I had to make do with the conditions I’d encountered, but the fog allowed for some atmospheric shots. This image is barely edited. Nikon F100 + Kodak Pro Image 100 Nikon AF Nikkor 50 mm f/1.8D 50 mm | 5 s | f/5.6 | ISO 100 - FLICKR-Roll-33-Frame-02.jpg
A Mist Opportunity | Dominik Marczuk
Lake Otomińskie (near Gdańsk, Poland) on a still and misty morning. The water is calm and reflective, with a thin layer of ice forming along the shore. The opposite bank is obscured by a thick layer of fog. I hadn’t anticipated the fog, and I think it didn’t really do justice to most of the lakeside scenes. The opposite bank is barely visible, though there’s some layering going on. The lake is half-frozen and featureless, and the only somewhat interesting foreground elements were the textured ice and vegetation on the shore. I don’t consider this shot particularly pleasing; it lacks a clear subject and the bottom part is rather distracting. But I’ve seen much worse. Nikon F100 + Kodak Pro Image 100 AF-S Nikkor 16-35 mm 1:4 G ED 24 mm | 1/3 s | f/5.6 | ISO 100 - FLICKR-Roll-33-Frame-07.jpg